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©2004-2009 =thebottom
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Submitted: January 21, 2004
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Resolution: 666×800
Comments: 46
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well I'm not to crazy about this right now. So I want to know what everyone else thinks! but any way around I'll robably pull it off or resubmit it!

EDIT: Ok after everyones input I did the best I can to make this a
stronger piece.
I changed the eyes up and tried to even them out a little
I worked on the shading a little more
I added a little texture to the top
I forgot to sign it............fuuuuuuuuuuuu

Edit(2): I signed it
I know its not perfect but im content with the way it is now.

thanks for your help!
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Erasmo this came out awesome. Good job my boy!
wow..things have moved up a gear!
love everything about this...except a personal thing..and by no means a critisim
I think lips look better when lipliner is not too many shades darker than lippy
:lol:
such a chic comment hey:crazy:
she rawks
This is the best illustration I have seen in a while.
Good work.

(I love your icon btw)
oooh I like it though!
her nose does look a bit small (lenghty wise)...but then again some people have 'ittle noses and big mouths ;)
I like her hair :)

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ahh.. very nice, I love the composition and the shading, the flesh and hair is beautiful.. although Im not particularily fond of the face... none the less this caught my attention fantastic job!

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'Imagination is the body of God'
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The anatomy of the body looks spot on, but I think the face needs a little tweaking, the eyes and lips seem a little too large. You've made an amazing job over colouring it though, the skin tone is wonderful.
Good job overall. Hope this helps.
Pretty good

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wow. nice drawing
You're getting better at shading the skin *nods* The face looks a little unfinished compared to the rest of the body, especially with all the nice details on the arm directly under her face.
A few little things to fix:
-Your color spilled over the lines on the inside of the elbow, the side of her face and the fingers.
-Left eye is bigger than right eye, it's probably an unconscious habit from your more cartoony/monster drawing style.
-The ear's got some kinda wonkiness goin' on, you should either go over it again, or hide it under the hair. (you'll notice I go for option B most of the time! hehe)

I think those will round it out and you'll be alot happier with it :) oh, nice job with the hair (the shading is really great) and the background

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too much mascara

she looks like a heroin addict :rofl:

dont ask me how I know :|

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