well I'm not to crazy about this right now. So I want to know what everyone else thinks! but any way around I'll robably pull it off or resubmit it!
EDIT: Ok after everyones input I did the best I can to make this a
stronger piece.
I changed the eyes up and tried to even them out a little
I worked on the shading a little more
I added a little texture to the top
I forgot to sign it............fuuuuuuuuuuuu
Edit(2): I signed it
I know its not perfect but im content with the way it is now.
wow..things have moved up a gear!
love everything about this...except a personal thing..and by no means a critisim
I think lips look better when lipliner is not too many shades darker than lippy
such a chic comment hey
she rawks
ahh.. very nice, I love the composition and the shading, the flesh and hair is beautiful.. although Im not particularily fond of the face... none the less this caught my attention fantastic job!
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The anatomy of the body looks spot on, but I think the face needs a little tweaking, the eyes and lips seem a little too large. You've made an amazing job over colouring it though, the skin tone is wonderful.
Good job overall. Hope this helps.
You're getting better at shading the skin *nods* The face looks a little unfinished compared to the rest of the body, especially with all the nice details on the arm directly under her face.
A few little things to fix:
-Your color spilled over the lines on the inside of the elbow, the side of her face and the fingers.
-Left eye is bigger than right eye, it's probably an unconscious habit from your more cartoony/monster drawing style.
-The ear's got some kinda wonkiness goin' on, you should either go over it again, or hide it under the hair. (you'll notice I go for option B most of the time! hehe)
I think those will round it out and you'll be alot happier with it oh, nice job with the hair (the shading is really great) and the background
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love everything about this...except a personal thing..and by no means a critisim
I think lips look better when lipliner is not too many shades darker than lippy
such a chic comment hey
she rawks
Good work.
(I love your icon btw)
her nose does look a bit small (lenghty wise)...but then again some people have 'ittle noses and big mouths
I like her hair
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'Imagination is the body of God'
- William Blake
Good job overall. Hope this helps.
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A few little things to fix:
-Your color spilled over the lines on the inside of the elbow, the side of her face and the fingers.
-Left eye is bigger than right eye, it's probably an unconscious habit from your more cartoony/monster drawing style.
-The ear's got some kinda wonkiness goin' on, you should either go over it again, or hide it under the hair. (you'll notice I go for option B most of the time! hehe)
I think those will round it out and you'll be alot happier with it
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The Unstoppable Rainbow Blight
Check out my music: [link]
she looks like a heroin addict
dont ask me how I know
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